Warrior Cats RP: ForestClan

[Redpaw]

redpool noded yes we do need clan members

[Grep42]

Dogtooth nodded, "Well, I'll go put this away then. I should get hunting, too," She hurried to escape the situation, avoiding Redpool.
(Ok, for my sake put quotations around whatever your character says. I'm sorry, I'm a grammer enthusiast.)

[Redpaw]

''redpools walks away'' and curls then sleeps

[Grep42]

(... you're just trying to annoy me.)

[Redpaw]

huh? is it because of my grammer im not that good at grammer

[Grep42]

(Ok, I'm sorry for snapping. It's simple, really. Heres an example:
"Hello," Name said.
The quotes go around whatever they say, not what they do.)

[Saebre]

*Icestar glanced at DogTooth. "Thank you, Dogtooth. And yes, we are in desperate need of more members. Also, welcome to the clan." Icestar's heart dropped in her belly. She also had a crush on RedPool, Forestclans medicine cat. She knew very well he couldn't have a mate. She would choose someone else to be her mate.*

[Saebre]

"Welcome to Forestclan, and thanks for the moss" Icestar mewed. Her heart dropped when she knew Dogtooth liked RedPool too. Icestar knew very well that medicine cats couldn't have mates. She would find someone else, then.
She sighed, and took the moss, and padded to her den. She weaved the moss in with the feathers she had collected the night before, and curled herself into her nest.*

[Saebre]

*Icestar padded out from her den, and stared across the clearing, to the winding river beyond it. She sighed.
( I just wish we had more cats here. If we go into war, we'll be hopeless.) Icestar jerked her head away from her thoughts. She looked towards the medicine cats den, and saw RedPool and DogTooth talking. She saw love in her eyes. Or was it hate, or anger? She wished she knew, and she wished RedPool would love her. But he was a medicine cat. He could love a cat, but couldn't have a cat as a mate.*

[Grep42]

"Thankyou, Icestar," Dogtooth replied. She went over to Redpool after she left the moss in Icestar's den. "I'm going out hunting, do you need anything?"

[Saebre]

"You're welcome." she replied. "You will make a fine warrior."
*Icestar saw Dogtooth pad over to RedPool. She signed, and padded to the entrance to the camp. She padded over a couple of leaves, and spotted two plump mice sitting together. She dropped into a hunters crouch, and sneaked up to the mice. She pounced, and unsheathed her claws. She felted satisfied to feel blood and flesh bubble around her claws. She killed them with a nip to the neck. Icestar buried them in a pile of leaves, and saw a blackbird. She dropped into a hunters crouch. She leaped, and landed on the blackbirds neck. Icestar killed it with a swift blow to the neck. She buried it with the mice. Icestar padded a little further, ans saw a fat squirrel. Once more, she dropped into a crouch, and leaped on the squirrel. It sprinted away, and climbed a tree. "Fox dung!" she yowled. Icestar was so distracted by her false catch, she missed a fat water vole walking along the ground. She saw it, and killed with her claws. She grabbed her vole, two mice, and blackbird, and padded to camp, satisfied*

[Saebre]

She padded into camp, and layed down the prey she caught at the to- be fresh kill pile. She padded to the river, and leaped in. " Weeeeeeee!" she yowled. Icestar went under, and and saw fish swimming by. Her head bobbed to the surface, and leaped onto a fat salmon. She layed it on the bank, and caught another salmon, one by one. She caught 5 fish salmon, and grabbed them by the fish by the tail. She padded to the fresh kill pile, and layed her fish down.

[Grep42]

Dogtooth walked into the forest, going around steathly. She sniffed for anything at all she could find to catch. Aha, a rabbit! It was only a small one, barely an adult. She stalked forward, and waited for the right moment to strike. She leaped, and landed on it. Biting it's neck, Dogtooth killed the unfortunate creature. She buried it, and went for something more.

[Saebre]

Icestar padded over to the medicine cats den. She saw RedPool curled up in his nest. "he's so beautiful." she mumbled under her breath. She padded over to RedPool, and and ran her tail under his chin. She pressed her nose to his cheek, and licked his cheek. "I love you, RedPool." Icestar curled up next to him, and ran her tail along his spine. She smelled his sweet scent. Icestar fell asleep next to RedPool.

[Saebre]

(Ok, I'm sorry for snapping. It's simple, really. Heres an example:
"Hello," Name said.
The quotes go around whatever they say, not what they do.)

I'm pretty sure RedPool knows what quotation marks are :/
If he says that he isn't very good a grammar, then that's that. I don't want any arguing with my clan mates. Please. It makes us look weak.
Now, am I clear?