Forest survival

[Foxesrule]

(Kibawolf, unless you can't, and you're on your I-pad or whatever, can you try and use more grammar? Sorry if it seems like I'm being rude, it just makes it easier to read.)

[KibaWolf]

"WE DO NOT ACT LIKE PUPS!"TsumeHeart said,indignantly.He had read the expression on her face and eyes carefully.He pulled his lips back in a snarl.KibaPaw then attacked him.She was sick of this.Although,because he was her brother,she didn't break bones or kill him.She could only draw blood,and this was the same for him.She bit his scruff quickly,making it harder for him to attack her.He yelped in surprise."SHUT UP SHUT UP!"KibaPaw screamed.She had hated doing this,even when they were cubs and had to do this to train.A tear rolled down her cheek,and Tsume relaxed on the ground as she pinned him.He never knew it hurt her so much to hurt him.He rose slightly,and licked her jaw.Then,he lowered himself again.She allowed him to get up,and he smiled at her."Thank you.For letting me up."He said,trying to be grateful without seeming unusually nice."No problem."She muttered,appauled slightly at how she hadn't drew blood,yet relieved she didn't have to.She went over to the dog,apparantly named Nova,and sat down in front of her."Sorry for my brother,Nova.He kind of...uses everything you do to read your thoughts.It's easy,once you get the hang of it."KibaPaw said,respectfully.TsumeHeart laid down next to his sister and lowered his muzzle onto his paws."Sorry Nova.And what was that squirrel's name?.....Oh that's right.Sorry Scuttle.If you need any help with that owl,we'll help.And yeah we know we know Shadow is already helping.But if you need help while you're sleeping,we'll watch."

[Foxesrule]

(Still tryign not to be...Rude, or anything, but I mainly meant more spaces. However, if you want, you don't have to leave spaces after every full stop, comma, whatever.

[Swifty]

Nova stared at them with her lips pulled back in the beginnings of a snarl. Her eye was really starting to hurt again, and these wolves were giving her a headache. At least it was starting to stop bleeding...
"Pups." She repeated under her breath, eyes narrowed into slits and the odd fire-ish mist steaming from her eyes. "Scuttle, get on my back and lets go." The dog paused, staring at Scuttle for a moment. "Or you could just follow."

[NatureHeart]

As Skyeler flew through the open sky, she stared at her surroundings blankly. She had been thinking about her sister all the way home. She was in the middle of thinking of the time that hawk got her when she heard loud barking.
"We do not act like pups!"
She quickly looked around for a raving animal and found a male wolf being torn down by a younger female. What a weakling! She landed in a nearby tree to watch the fight, and came across the dog and squirrel.
"Newbies to your pack of weirdos I see?" she hooted to the dog that she still didn't know the name to.

[Swifty]

Nova let out a loud growl, irritated. "Why don't you just LEAVE, Owl? I thought you were done trying to eat Scuttle." She snapped. The sun was finally going down below the tree line and only soft rays of sun trickled here and there.

[NatureHeart]

"Well I was going to leave, but I thought you might miss me!" The barn owl hooted. Skyeler thought this dog need a bit more... accessories.

[hoopyscoop]

Mila kept running, she didn't want to get injured. She heard faint barking and growling sounds from behind her. She finally found a hole and dashed in, nervous from what happened earlier, she laid down hoping for some rest.

[Swifty]

Her lips pulled back in the beginnings of a snarl, but she stopped herself, keeping a neutral face. Nova was about to say something snarky and sadistic in reply, but she was cut off by the clouds overhead thundering loudly. Her ears fell back and she gave a soft whimper. If there was anything she was afraid of, it was storms.

[NatureHeart]

Skyeler saw that the dog was about to snarl something to her, but it held back. The barn owl cocked her head at this action. Sh looked to the sky at the sound of thunder, then looked back to the dog. She backed down too. She has been afraid of lightning since it struck her tree 2 years ago, killing her mother. She flew out of the tree and onto the ground, getting as low as she could. She knew she had a higher chance of getting struck the higher she was, so she wanted to minimize it. She had completely forgot about the others as the storm came in, and she just cared about not getting struck by lightning.

[Swifty]

Her eyes followed the Owl as she went to move for land, and with a smirk she was about to ripherfreakingwingsoff--- when it started pouring rain. Nova yelped, and moved to stand over Scuttle so the squirrel wouldn't get carried away by the rush of water that was also going down hill. She whined pitifully, hoping Scuttle would hurry up and her on her back so they could get into the cover of the trees.

[NatureHeart]

As water poured on the owl, she was being swept away, but she didn't care as long as she was away from the trees. A rush of water came and she was carried down the hill.There was a small hole on the side of the hill and she climbed into it, barely succeeding. She looked out her hole in fear as lightning flashed and struck a tree. Her mind flowed with history telling her she will die in this storm from a fire started by lightning.

[Swifty]

Thats what I intended to do actually. Fire.)

Half an hour had passed and Nova had managed to nudge Scuttle along towards the cover of the trees. The storm was letting up, finally, and the seemingly endless rain was slowing to a soft drizzle. Nova shook out her fur lazily, laying down under the closest tree near her. She rested her head on her paws and closed her eyes, ears laying back on her head.

Crack!
Nova jolted awake, eyes wide as she whipped her head side-to-side. "Wha-"
Crack! The dog stood, staring out into the storm. "Fire!" She blurted, seeing the faint glow of reds and oranges in a near-by tree.

[NatureHeart]

Skyeler flashed open her eyes at a loud crack.
"What the-" she started.
crack!
She looked out of the hole to see what it was. The fire had spread! The red-orange glow was spreading fast, and towards her! She tarted digging the hole deeper, but it was no use. Her talons weren't for digging. Skyeler couldn't o back out, but she couldn't stay in. She didn't know what to do.

[Swifty]

(Waiting for Mindy to post.)