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Hello everyone, as you can see, I am making a story. It needs a name though, so I will start anyway. Chapter 1 The wind blew harder every second, but very chance it would stop. But no chance happened. My name is Cocoa, a female Perigrine Falcon. I can't remember my species name but I am a falcon. I once had a lifetime of a chance, and I am here to tell you the tale. I was fast asleep, when all of a sudden I heard this:
TAKE IT ON,
FLY SO HIGH YOU WON't BELIEVE YOUR EYES
O-OHH....
WE ARE FLYERS
WE ARE AMAZERS
WE ARE BIRDS OF A FLIGHT
WE'RE KINGS OF FLY
WE ARE THE FEATHERS
YOU CAN't SEE US
WERE SO FAST
YOU ONLY SEE US IN A SEC
FALCON FLIGHT
FAL-CON FLIGHT
FALCO FLIGHT
ARE WE STUPID?
NO!
ARE WE FLIGHTLESS?
NEVER
EVER
CAN WE FLY
OH YEAH
FALCON FLIGHT
FAL-CON FLIGHT!

I had heard every word. It was the best I ever heard! I watched the adult falcons go into flight. One female and male kissed then flew off together. I realized it was mating season.

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Odd
o_o

Perigrine Peak...?

Døøm Dragøn wrote:Perigrine Peak...?

I like that.

Yes, it is pretty different to what I've read, but I think it's cool. Is that the whole first chapter?

Alright I have an idea.
Falcon Gone Wild
Anyways, I will give out a character form:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Family:
Mate:
Crush:
Family:
Species Of Bird:
History:
Other:

Chapter 2

I flew up to find a mate, but nobody accepted me. Here in Montana, we choose the best mates. Bt I never found one(bt is but). I sighed and flew back down to the tree. bi wondered what I would do now.

song: Take The Love

OH NOBODY WANTS ME
NONE LOVE ME
I WOULD LIKE IT
IF I HAD A MATE...

I could not finish the song in time, because I knew that the falcons would tease me. I had never liked it if they teased me about my love song. Love songs are important, cause they are used to attract mates. I am a terrible singer. Nobody likes me. I am a runt. My family gave me little food. Yup. I grew small and weak, but somehow I lived. I always thought about my love song. When I first tried a love song it went like this:

LA AA GAK WALKKLAHDHDJHFHWJA

I got teased for the time. Alright. I knew something was happening. But what?


END OF CHAPTER 2

Nice story, though it seems a bit like Happy Feet.

Chapter 3

I looked at my necklace. It was important to me just to keep it safe, my mother had said. All of a sudden I realized that I needed to do a bit of lone time.
(for rest of storey ill 3rd person)

Cocoa flew down to a dead pine tree. She was hoping for something and something did happen, but it wasn't normal. Cocoa vanished from Montana to Tanzania,Africa.

TANZANIA, AFRICA.

Cocoa landed on a thorn bush. She got all the thorns off her. "This isn't Montana. Where am I?" Cocoa said. She heard voices saying:

song: Africa

O WAAYYOO
O WAAYYOO
O WAYYOOO
LETS HAVE FUN IN AFRICA
LET THE SOUL TAKE YOUR HEART
LET YOUR LIFE SING AND DANCE
I NEED YOUR BODY
TO DANCE AND TO LOVE
FEEL IT
SING IT
DANCE WITH US
FLY
SO
AFRICA
O WAAYYOO
O WAYYOOOO
LETS HAVE SOME FUN IN AFRICA
FEEL THE HEART ENTER YOUR SOUL
YOU CAN FLY AND DANCE TOO
FEEL IT
SING IT
DANCE WITH US
FLY
SO
AFRICA


END OF CHAPTER