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Attacked By Crocodiles and other animals

Postby Alpha Ridley » Sat Dec 22, 2012 7:21 am

Ever had a hippo try to trample you?

How about a komodo dragon follow your every move?

Or a tiger attempting to maul you?


Welcome to ABCAOA, the story ideas topic for made up animal attacks (realistic).

Anyone can make a story that has a Story Name on the topic.

These stories happen to 9 to 14 year olds.

Stories

Name: In A While, Crocodile
Location: Okavango Delta, Botswana
Attacker: Nile Crocodile
Character: Marley, 11 years old.
How the attack happened: She got too close.
Available?: :)

Name: Bad News Bear
Location: Rocky Mountains, Alberta
Attacker: Black Bear
Character: Jason, 10 years old.
How the attack happened: The bear had lost its fear of humans after getting handfed a lot.
Available?: :)

Name: King Of The REAL Jungle
Location: Amazon, Brazil
Attacker: Jaguar
Character: Samuel, 14 years old.
How the attack happened: Same with In A While, Crocodile.
Avaliable?: :)


If you want any of these stories to work on, PM me if you do.

P.S: :) = Yes :( = No
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Re: Attacked By Crocodiles and other animals

Postby Foxesrule » Sun Dec 30, 2012 6:53 am

Name: Rhino Rampage.
Location: Dudely Zoo, England.
Attacker: Rhino.
Character: Luke, 14 years old.
How the attack happened: Luke had went to the zoo, and one of the zoo-keepers had forgot to lock the rhinoceros cage, and when one of the toddlers poked the cage, it gone really angry. Really angry. And went on a rampage.
Available? :)
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Re: Attacked By Crocodiles and other animals

Postby WildLife » Sun Apr 14, 2013 10:07 am

Name:Please don't feed the wolves.
Location: Canada, Somewhere.
Attacker:Wolf pack
Character: Abagail, 12 years.
How the attack happened:Abagail got close to a wolf pup, mistaking it for a puppy and picked it up, got attacked by the rest of the pack.
Avaliable?: :)
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Re: Attacked By Crocodiles and other animals

Postby animalguy888 » Wed May 01, 2013 8:41 pm

WolfPawPrints wrote:Name:Please don't feed the wolves.
Location: Canada, Somewhere.
Attacker:Wolf pack
Character: Abagail, 12 years.
How the attack happened:Abagail got close to a wolf pup, mistaking it for a puppy and picked it up, got attacked by the rest of the pack.
Avaliable?: :)


Pardon my constructive critisism but I being me think It should me more believable. Well First off a wolf pup and a puppy have a signifagant difference even to a 12 year old. Such the way the look and appear and behave. For example there a big differnce between a chow chow or golden retriever puppy and a wolf pup. Also I do not think the title fits the scenario. Like what does feeding wolves have to do with it in unspcified wilderness area of canada and why would a young child be in that type of place anyway. Wolves are also known to be very shy animals that avoid human contact. Most wolf attacks would probbably be by the carless type of people who get them as pets most if not all of the time illegaly depending on were you live.

So maybe it could take place in Anchorage,Alaska? Maybe the 12 year old girl's living with her uncle who purchased his own wolf pack. Maybe while she wandered off to feed them on her own and there was a spike in agression in response to the food? Maybe here it bit her arm when she fed them through the cage and it turned into a life or death tug of war of some sort.

anyway I think your idea could make a pretty good story. I justed wanted to give some suggestions to make it even better.
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