Silver, while still on top of Koi's back, had her mind racing. Her moment of dominance faded away as the clan leader found her as she killed the rat. Silver could think fast. She leaped off of the chinchilla, but, no! A patch of tangled fur caught her nails as she leaped off, providing nothing but a hard landing and a little blood, as Amber landed on top of her. It didn't help Koi was trying to bit her in the neck, attempting to suffocate her while Amber ripped her apart from her back.
The pain was unbearable, as she was being ripped apart. Perhaps Koi helping Amber kill the mouse formed an ally, which would surely ruin the forest's bad reputation as the two clans over ruled the third. This wasn't what Silver wanted, but she was helpless against it. Her body was weak, and the blood trickled out of her veins. Her eyes started to fog, as she swooned from the shock of defeat.
It was dark. No light was to be seen. Just a voice.
"Silver," it called, "Silver, please, come to me."
Silver could see nothing she was blind in this world, but her hearing still worked fine. She walked for minutes before she came to a light.
"Silver," it spoke, voice low, such as that of an Alpha wolf. "Silver, you have made a bad choice in life. Your violence had turned on you, and now you have paid the price."
"But-but," she stuttered, utterly confused, "I did but what the voices told me!"
"But there was a small voice. In the back of your mind it spoke, 'That isn't right.'"
Silver was disappointed in herself. That voice had always been heard, but the louder voices took over. That little voice never stood a chance.
"And what did your mother tell you?"
Silver could only stare at the darkness beneath her feet and mumble, "If someone is mean to you, revenge is never the answer.."
"Right. Did you hate your mother so that you disobeyed her as much as you did?"
Silver was infuriated now. "I loved my mother!!"
"Then why did you disobey?"
Silver was silent. She couldn't think of an answer. She was without an excuse, without a good heart. Without a soul.
"Step into the light, Silver. You will find your heart in it, and you will see your mother, and she will be happy to see you."
The white mouse was in tears. She could start all over if she stepped into that light. One step after another, she came closer to it. Her nimble feet finally stepped into it, and she was carried away. Into a better world, where violence had no meaning. Where she would be in peace.
As her soul left her body to the pastures of Heaven, her physical body went limp. She was paler than her fur, which was now stained red. Her muscles relaxed, and all was calm in her.
Silver was gone now, but her story was sure to progress as the mouse who betrayed her clan.
(I now need a new character. :3)
Name: Misty
Gender: Female
Clan: Willow
Species: Rat
Appearance:
Personality: Misty is very sweet, and hates to be involved in the war. She enjoys tending to the wounds of others, and loves to help. She is very handing with medical supplies, but she is not afraid to hurt someones feeling, or make them scared. She doesn't beat around the bush at anything, and just straight out tells them. She likes to explore and find new things.
Other: She was a former pet, and knows the way around the forest just about as well as a blind mouse. (Meaning hardly at all. :3)
By zee way, may want to update the front page so that it contains the new members, as well as the absence of Silver.