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Re: Elk Story (NCP Elk, Sorta)
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:49 pm
by Saebre
When will you make it? I'm dying to read it
Re: Elk Story (NCP Elk, Sorta)
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 1:00 pm
by NatureHeart
Probably in a few days! I'm working on it right now atm!
Re: Elk Story (NCP Elk, Sorta)
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 1:08 pm
by StarWolf
Hm, rather nice. It was a little fast-paced for me and you could use a bit more detail in some areas(maybe just describing fur colors or how some elk's eyes shined brighter than the others) but it was really good. The different colors helped quite a bit, and made it easier to read.
Good luck for your next story. I'll definitely be reading that. c;
Re: Elk Story (NCP Elk, Sorta)
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 1:25 pm
by NatureHeart
Thank you StarWolf! Total agreement! I think I will edit some more in there...